2 Singles! Plasticity is complete! Full version! [Dec 18/08]

[Calaway Park]

Updated versions on page 4

 

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[paintballer]

Being someone who's not really into that type of music, I actually kinda liked it!

[Groteslurf]

^same here. It's not bad at all, but at the same time not something I would buy.

[man]

Even though im not a fan of the syle the song was great.

[Vekoma Fan Boy]

You know that this isn't exactly my kind of music, but it wasn't half bad. At least it was listenable, which is good compared to most pop that I hear I can't stand.

[Yankee cannonball]

I could imagine this being played at my school dances. Wait, that wasn't a compliment . I mean that it's got a good beat for dancing.

[SonOfBeastSucks]

I liked it. Be sure to post the longer version if you end up extending it!

[thrillerman1]

That's pretty good! It almost sounds like it has a little bit of Kraftwerk influence and that's always a good thing.

[chmilo24]

That was acculy a really cool song. I wasn't sure what it would sound like but that was really good. It has a nice beat and is the type of song that I would turn all the way up and break-dance to. When will your CD be in stores?

 

--Chris

[Kalepi_Konei]

Yeah honestly I'm not into that kinda music but just the tune to it is so addicting. God release it and I'll buy it even if it's just that 1 song (that or I'll limewire it to my iPod.) Sounds good man, very addicting I played it twice and I'm about to play it more.

[no_brain_er]

Well, I do sense potential. I would probably be able to make a little better of a comment if there were a longer version, but I know how difficult making a song like this is. The point is that it was actually really good. Fantastic!

[Calaway Park]

I've updated it

 

http://media.putfile.com/LivelyFixed

 

I definitely want advice on how to improve this section though. Thanks!

Livelycont.mp3

New verse

[Kalepi_Konei]

Not a big fan of the new verse, kinda kills the whole beat to it. I think you should just stick with the beat you have going and the beat to "when I step on the dance floor" should continue throughout the song, sure you can change the pitch and things like that, but the last bit just seem mashed together. And I still wanna here the "luh-uh-uh-i-i-i-v-uh-uh-uh-lee-ee-ee." At the end cuz' that's the coolest part of the song. Its so catchy.

[ash.1111]

Wow, That's good!

 

I'll have to buy the song off iTunes

[PointeBreak]

It's good but not great. Have no idea where it's headed though so it's kind of disposable, like something I've heard before. Not to the same degree as most songs in its genre though so guess it stands out in that respect.

 

^ Hawhaw.

[Calaway Park]

I've taken the tune to a new level!

 

http://media.putfile.com/Bum-tsh-bum-tsh-LIVLEH

 

Lively update, the vocals are redone and I tried to make it sound more like me.

 

http://media.putfile.com/Holy-Crap-42

Beat for an upcoming song called 'The End.'

[itsme102]

I thnk in your newest version, you tried alittle too much on the verses, take out one of the tones and I think it would sound really good. And I would keep working on that 2nd verse, I think that still has potential to get better

[Calaway Park]

http://media.putfile.com/Lively-with-Chorus

 

New chorus and vocals! Sounds way better

[Manny In England]

Nice, you've got some really good mixing talent, but I still prefer the very first version you uploaded back in the first post.

[onewheeled999]

I agree with Manny In England, it just seems to blend better in the original version. In the newest one, the vocals just kind of seem out there, like they were just added in for filler. Great job, though.

[Calaway Park]

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I uploaded the wrong version, sorry! I named the 2 files the same thing aside from the end and my Mac truncated it, the one I uploaded's vocals are too loud and they don't have the chorus effect or reverb on them.

 

Try now.

[andre8]

I will make a totally more dance-tastic electronic future-like single when Warner Bros. replies to my song.

 

Anyways, it was so-so.

But not as good as Madonna!

[Calaway Park]

Update- I think the Chorus should have more definition as a separate part of the song- it's all kind of one long beat right now, so I did a totally new synth sound and it sounds AMAZING- it's really complex, I think it sounds crazy catchy.

 

I hope you like it- because I think it's staying. I think it sounds awesome to me.

 

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[Kalepi_Konei]

I like this new version but there is still one thing that bugs me thats been in this is theres a deep voice that comes in and out and kinda takes over the song, lower the volume of that or get rid of it completely, I think it kinda kills it, the only time its needed is when you do the lu-uh-uh-i-etc. thing. Other than that its great! I would totally buy this song off of iTunes!

[onewheeled999]

I totally agree with Kalepi_Konei. The song is pretty great so far, very complex! But the deep voice during the verse is very overpowering and distracting, you should definitely lower the volume on it. But it does add to the song, so I wouldn't completely remove it. I definitely think this is the best version of the song so far, though!

 

I would also buy this off of iTunes if I could. Great job!

 

--Eric