A good start here, just one thing; and that's the mile and mile long straight concrete paths. They are too empty and too boring.
[MOD EDIT: Yes, the WERE to boring- as in going there. The correct word you want to use is TOO. R.D.- GFMT]
Ok, this is now so good I can't ignore it any longer. Before I thought it just looked a bit boring, and the only thing you seem to have done, is photoshopping :S It's amazing what some contrast and light-changing can do to a picture...
You'll definately get an accolade with this, and i sure hope it's higher than that new one... I mean this is so much better, and the other isn't even finished :S