boughtontroy Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 (edited) Hello my name is Troy Boughton I'm a local journalist and ill be guiding a theme park called Canada's Dreamland located in Toronto, Ontario in Canada. Shot0085.bmp entering construction site of Canada's Dreamland Shot0086.bmp that's the rules of the park Shot0087.bmp this is the front gate Shot0088.bmp that's the ticket booth and have a good day Edited January 19, 2013 by A.J.
historyfreak92 Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 Now I see that you're doing better, Nice entrance so far!
simaticable Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 How many parks do you need to have at once? It's better to have one park that you can concentrate on then worry about two or three other parks. Not trying to be harsh, just wondering.
I305KD Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 Nice start! Glad to see you getting used to the forums. My only thing is that there should be fencing around the path heading toward the entrance. I would recommend ShyGuy's Circus Sets. They have some really nice fences and they would fit very well in your park.
fraroc Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 Not bad, I was a bit worried that you were a troll, but it seems you finally were able to get used to TPR! The park looks very good, just a point of advice? Rename a peep "David Walsh" and press CTRL and U in unison and it makes the buttons go away. It makes pics look 10X better.
boughtontroy Posted January 21, 2013 Author Posted January 21, 2013 Shot0089.bmp entering the park Shot0090.bmpthis the sign made from hedges in International Street Shot0091.bmpthis is a locker building to put items in Shot0092.bmpworking on path in International Street even on other side Shot0094.bmpthey're building a stage Shot0095.bmphave a good day Vote see which one is goes on International Street A-Eiffel Tower B-Sky Tower C-Carosuel D-Mountain E-Dream Tower CFR
historyfreak92 Posted January 21, 2013 Posted January 21, 2013 I like that Hedge Logo, but I hope to see a carousel at the entrance!
I305KD Posted January 22, 2013 Posted January 22, 2013 I also like that hedge logo. Different from the other Paramount/Cedar Fair parks. But, there are a couple of things that need fixing. - The locker building needs work. I'm not sure if it's still a work in progress, but it doesn't look right. The roof doesn't look right at all. - The walkways need some work too. They are to blocky and don't look right. I can see potential here, but there is some TLC to be done. Good luck!
boughtontroy Posted January 23, 2013 Author Posted January 23, 2013 (edited) Shot0096.bmp Hello again Shot0097.bmpthey already done reworking the roof Shot0098.bmpthey also already complete the first building in International Street Shot0099.bmpthey finished the path either on the other side Shot0100.bmpworking on a new area Shot0101.bmpthey also added the path and the planters Shot0102.bmpthis is the spot for a first ride and well be reveling tomorrow Shot0103.bmpgrab a coffee before leaving the park Shot0105.bmphave a good day Announced first Carousel ride in Canada called Canada's Carosuel it will be located in International Street and also the park will be open on May 13,1975 with about 20 rides and 1 coaster called Looping Star it will be the tallest coaster in Canada Edited January 24, 2013 by A.J.
boughtontroy Posted January 24, 2013 Author Posted January 24, 2013 Oh come on no comments Shot0106.bmp Hello once again it's been past two months now it's close to September 1973 Shot0107.bmphere it is the first ride have been completed and they added a path to the park Shot0108.bmphere's the new building is the ice cream shop Shot0111.bmphave a good day
Coupon Posted January 24, 2013 Posted January 24, 2013 I think you would get more comments if you finished more of the park before you showed it. Looks empty and bare with all the vacant land around it but whats there is nice.
boughtontroy Posted January 25, 2013 Author Posted January 25, 2013 Well I already got halfway through construction of the park right now I just needed more rides, shops, and restaurants
I305KD Posted January 26, 2013 Posted January 26, 2013 Looking good. I think you should add some flowers around your park. It would look great! Also, maybe explain your park a bit more in your updates. They are rather bare. But your park looks good and it's only going to get better.
boughtontroy Posted January 26, 2013 Author Posted January 26, 2013 Shot0113.bmpHello again and they add flowers and flag poles Shot0114.bmpthat's one of the rides called Parachute Tower Shot0115.bmphere's the view of the rest of the area Shot0116.bmpthis the new area called Coney Mall Shot0117.bmphere's the view of Sky Wheel and Tea Cup's Ride Shot0118.bmphave a good day
I305KD Posted January 26, 2013 Posted January 26, 2013 Looking good! I recommend that you put fencing around your paths and walkways. It would make your park more realistic and a bit less like a box. Overall it looks great. Glad to see the park evolve like it is now!
boughtontroy Posted January 26, 2013 Author Posted January 26, 2013 Shot0122.bmphello again and three new buildings in International Street area Shot0123.bmphere's two new rides Scrambler and Thunder Bobs Shot0124.bmpwhat's this a new ride being built Shot0125.bmpInternational Street fountains being tested Shot0126.bmphere's a new ride in Coney Mall called Monster Shot0127.bmpa new path in Coney Mall area Shot0128.bmphere's another new ride called Nightmares and the total of rides 10 and also have a good day
boughtontroy Posted January 27, 2013 Author Posted January 27, 2013 Shot0131.bmphello again it's evening and now it's July 1974 Shot0132.bmpthat's the new restaurant called Fast Feet Diner they serve hamburgers, fries, and drinks Shot0133.bmptwo new rides called Giant Slide and Zipper Shot0134.bmpthat's also a new ride called Dream Tower Shot0135.bmpthat's 200 foot tall Ferris Wheel called Giant Wheel Shot0136.bmpthat's the Canada's Tower is the elevator ride Shot0140.bmpskyline of the park at night and have a good day
simaticable Posted January 27, 2013 Posted January 27, 2013 Please take people's suggestions and add fences to your paths. It honestly looks much better when there is fencing in the park. Also, can you please check grammar and spelling in your captions?
coastin Posted January 27, 2013 Posted January 27, 2013 I feel like you need to take your time right now. I understand that with your storyline, your park is in the process of being built, but it looks like you are just rushing to get an update. Wait until you have all of the area done, or at least, fences, foliage, buildings, rides, etc. Also try to avoid shots like the shot of Dream Tower. All I really see in that picture is a bunch of boring, bare, land. You could have just taken a shot of the bottom of the ride, from the ground. I am not trying to bash you, or be rude, I am just trying to help you.
boughtontroy Posted January 27, 2013 Author Posted January 27, 2013 I feel like you need to take your time right now. I understand that with your storyline, your park is in the process of being built, but it looks like you are just rushing to get an update. Wait until you have all of the area done, or at least, fences, foliage, buildings, rides, etc. Also try to avoid shots like the shot of Dream Tower. All I really see in that picture is a bunch of boring, bare, land. You could have just taken a shot of the bottom of the ride, from the ground. I am not trying to bash you, or be rude, I am just trying to help you. ok i understand now but im almost done with my park
simaticable Posted January 28, 2013 Posted January 28, 2013 Once again, grammar and spelling can really go a long way on this site.
A.J. Posted January 28, 2013 Posted January 28, 2013 (edited) Once again, grammar and spelling can really go a long way on this site. Why do you think I haven't done anything to this thread? Setting an example... Edited January 28, 2013 by A.J.
boughtontroy Posted January 28, 2013 Author Posted January 28, 2013 Shot0141.bmphello again and the park has finally opened to the public after 2 years of construction Shot0142.bmppeople are filling in by 11:00 Shot0143.bmpit is now afternoon people are going to take on thrill rides in Coney Mall Shot0144.bmpit's getting evening and people are taking on Looping Star roller coaster Shot0147.bmppeople are still filling in even 2 hours before closing and have a good day
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