Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 i hope you all like this start to my park. i will hope to be posting as much as i can. this is my first serious park. criticism and help would be appreciated. thanks alot SCR11.BMP rough outline of Enterence SCR9.BMP A part of my Wild West section not sure what direction im heading in SCR12.BMP more of my WW section just started though SCR10.BMP Predator GCI coaster SCR13.BMP Hypersnake D.H. Morgan/ Arrow Hypercoaster in adjacent section to the WW section SCR14.BMP back end of Hypersnake, and nothing but a chairlift Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the ghost Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 Your main issue is most of the building seem a bit blocky, but if you fix that everything will be fine. The park also seems to be quite charming, so I would keep that feel as it is an added bonus in a lot of parks. Keep it up though, your rides and support work are awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 yea stupid me forgot to download the diagonal paths so the wouldn't seem blocky. so i mean ill try to stay away from the diagonal pathways. but thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the ghost Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 Lol, I'm not talking about the paths. What I am trying to say is amke your buildings a little more interesting. There are some that are okay, and flipsides is the best, but add some more roofing. Notice how the top of flipside is essentiaslly a box with the triangles and circle tiles. Add some variation to these things, and your park will be more visually appealing. Â http://themeparkreview.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=54121 Â Now I clearly dont expect thepark to be nearly this detailed as I know very few who can do this, and these are the best buildings I have ever seen, but see how awesome scenery can look when the buildings are different? Add some detail and creativity, and as long as you do not go completely over the top your park will be realistic, but still be detailed enough to be visually appealing. Just have some fun, and learn to use the scenery and be creative, and you'll do great. Â Edit: The bathrooms by flip side are kind of what I am talking about. There is a nice window in the arch, and the roof is interesting enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJClarke0912 Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 The hypercoaster is very nice looking! I (for some reason) always find it hard to make a good-looking Morgan hyper in RCT2, but you did it well! Kudos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 ghost: yea i understand how great you can make a park look, its just my skill. . . ehhh are not the best yet haha.  AJClarke0912: haha those are my specialties anytime you want me to design you one just let me know. haha many days have been spent designing my own customs Morgan coasters  thanks to both of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 sorry to double post. but hopefully more updates to come tomorrow your opinions will try to be applied Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastersax68 Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 Welcome to TPR! I love that Hyper, especially it's color scheme. Listen to Ghost about your buildings, though, you could learn a thing or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goliath513 Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 For being new to the game, you seem to have more skill than some people who have played the game for a while. The both coasters look great and pretty realistic as well. I could see this turning into a full scale legit low detail realistic park. Keep it up man! Â And ghost, was that post supposed sarcastic, or condescending? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the ghost Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 ^ It was not supposed to be either. The coasters are phenominal, but a few of the buildings are a little boring in my opinion. As a park it is very good, but there are a few blocky buildings. If I sounded condescending or sarcastic I apologize as that was not my intention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcjaco Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 sorry to double post. but hopefully more updates to come tomorrow your opinions will try to be applied  For one, welcome to TPR.  Two, please read TPR's posting rules (in the main forum). We use proper capitalization and grammar here.  Also, check out the Game Forum Etiquette thread at the top of the page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 These may be added in the near future as to an addition to a un-themed section of my park  Millennium Fear- Intamin Giga Coaster  The Wild Thng- GCI Wooden Coaster  Both coasters did exceptionally well in my previous park but sadly all i could recover from that park were these two saved coasters SCR2.BMP Millennium Fear front end and Cable Lift SCR3.BMP Millennium Fear back end and tunnel. SCR5.BMP The Wild Thing main overview and part of the Que line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
triggernel Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 They both look great, but Millennium Fear looks a little short for a Giga. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 Yea, that's the thing. I wanted to incorporate some rides from my previous park(s), beacuse. . . well I love them. Haha they are like my first born. I did not want to put in another GCI until furthering completion on my park. So i guess we will see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 More updates on a brand new theme  suggestions are thanked ill pick one SCR17.BMP Hurricane Boardwalk SCR5.BMP More HH SCR16.BMP More HH SCR3.BMP Even more HH... SCR2.BMP And possibly? A new ride? suggestions and I will pick one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastersax68 Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 Well, you've got a great new section there. I would personally add a swinging ship, either on the other side, or you could move the boats over and put it over the water. Just one question, though. Why is Tsunami red? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 10, 2010 Author Share Posted March 10, 2010 Well, you've got a great new section there. I would personally add a swinging ship, either on the other side, or you could move the boats over and put it over the water. Just one question, though. Why is Tsunami red? Â Why not? haha i'm trying to create a park that exemplifies my abilities as a park creator. I mean when it all comes down to it; ultimately the color may change if I put in the swinging ship. You right on that account, its just with me having no main entrance on the front of my park, its hard. Thats why I wanted to challenge myself and create a park thats out of the ordinary to what most people would take it as. Â But like you said, the color will most likely change. I want to expand on that beachy-eske theme. Â I'm just trying one day at a time to perfect my very own park. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcjaco Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 Challenge yourself by using proper capitalization and grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 11, 2010 Author Share Posted March 11, 2010 A simple color change to Tsunami gives the whole area a new upgraded look, especially now that Bahama Breeze was installed. SCR2.BMP Tsunami and the new paint job. SCR3.BMP The newest installment to HH is Bahama Breeze. A Vekoma family coaster, that surprisingly receives a full que. SCR5.BMP A new pathway was added to the WW area, which plans to be turn into a Midway, full of games and food stalls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mastersax68 Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 Looks nice, I'm loving that first helix on Bahama Breeze(hurray for Jimmy Buffet!) A quick suggestion, I would lower that water by 5 ft so it looks more realistic. Sorry for not mentioning this before now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 11, 2010 Author Share Posted March 11, 2010 Thanks for noticing the Jimmy Buffet Themeing. Â The water that needs lowered, would be the main lake, correct? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the ghost Posted March 11, 2010 Share Posted March 11, 2010 ^He's saying make sure the water is 5 feet lower everywhere pretty much. It is pretty much because you do not want anything to appear to be floating. Personally I noticed it the most on bahama breeze, as it appears the coaster is floating. You're buildings are much better now, and the boardwalk area has the feel of a real boardwalk! Awesome work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doerzb91 Posted March 11, 2010 Author Share Posted March 11, 2010 Thanks for the advice guys! I really hope that this park can get me placed on the map! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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