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Hello! I am working on a Mechanical Park (yes, that's the name because I haven't seen any others online). Work In Progress so far, but I am having difficulty choosing which scenery (trees) I should go for the empty spaces in the front of the park. Open to criticism!

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I would focus on adding detail to your path, currently it seems like an afterthought. Always use double wide path, at the least, and try to add fences or some scenery around it. The rides look cool though, the double B&M coaster is interesting.

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The rides look really good, however, I don't like how all the shops/ stalls are right on top of each other. It will be a disaster area once the grows and becomes really big. For scenery, I understand how finding scenery objects are for a park like this so I would try dead trees or maybe add topography features like craters or mountains.

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I like the first screen, the building is nice. See if you can work with the foliage though, right now the rocky ground just looks bare. I would refrain from using normal trees and such though, as they would look out of place, experiment, maybe you'll come up with something great.

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Hey guys! I've decided to re-do the entire Mechanical Park. Not having those "dead trees" really hurt and I was quickly becoming bored of it. I'm going to attempt my first story with it as well.

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Mechanical Park was founded and built in 1950. What came of this was no more than a giant landmass. This landmass was said to have been uninhabited for more than a decade, for unknown reasons.

 

 

 

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1950-1951

In 1950, upon buying the park, the first ride the owner had put in was a Launched Freefall. The reason for it being such a tall ride, was that he wanted to be able to have this park visible to many across the cities. When testing the ride, it came across at a maximum speed of 72 mph!

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1951

In just one year, there has been 6 new additions:

First Aid Room

Restroom

Information Kiosk

Burger Bar

Drink Stall

Fries Stall

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1951-1953

Nothing spectacular happened for the year 1952. It was rather slow as the owner

thought up a plan to increase popularity. For 1953, the first roller coaster is introduced

into the park!

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1953-1955

A gift shop was built in the mean time while the owner decided the next big step in this

park. Currently he is having trouble attracting guests to the park.

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