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Hi this is my fist time posting. It's not that its my first time registering, but it's just that I'm afraid that an evil elephant will jump out of the screen while I'm posting and kill me. And I don't know how to use the forum. So today I decided to post some parks I have made to this day.

 

Background Story

Mining Village was abandoned in 1969 and was found again on 2005. The remaining buildings were refurbished and flat rides were built inside them. On 2006 they've built Bandit. There's more improvements to come...

 

PS,

And if you want to say something about bandit's stations not being inside a building, I already fixed that and will be shown on the next update-tomorrow.

 

Screenshots

 

the entrance/the village

the village

Bandit

More Bandit

The Water Splash of Bandit

Village without sceneries and Lake Montie-more of a pond montie...

Mechenical mine themed wild Mouse ride I've been working on.

What is this??? A new ride perhaps.

 

Comments, Criticism and Suggestions Appreciated

 

Expect an update tomorrow!

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Sweet park!

I thought the pond looked a little weird though. The water level is equal to the land level.

 

Oh also, welcome! Make sure you read the posting rules of the forum if you havent already!

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Hmm...Bandit could use some realistic supports on it, but otherwise nice. I love the waterfall/splashdown on it. Just need to work on your structures a bit more (your mechanical mouse structure looks a bit ugly IMO)

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Sorry the update is kind of late. I have 12 years old stuff to do.

 

I added some trees (I'm still working on them)

 

Lake Montie is now below land level. I'm thinking of adding more flat rides,

 

and yes, i'll be fixing the structures on bandit as well.

 

I built a new ride called Blast!!!. It's a variation of powder keg. It's themed

 

on a run away train that was accidentally blasted off by a explosion at the

 

Acme Dynamite Factory.

 

And I'm still keeping the "ugly" building for the mechanical mouse.

 

SCREENSHOTS

 

 

Overview of Bandit

 

 

New Lake Montie

 

 

Finished Mechanical Mouse

 

 

OHHHH 2 new rides perhaps

 

 

Blast!!!!!

 

 

Dawson Station

 

 

Launch Area - A dynamite Factory

 

 

A fake track that I'm weirdly proud of...

 

Blast!!!

 

Posted

Wow. Awesome-Dawson. I love blast, and how you hacked a mine train launcher! Im sure Bandit will look nice once you fix the supports. I mean, the mouse turned out great now that its' done..

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Hmm...

Your woodie needs more supports on the side, you waterfall needs a source, where does the water come from?

The mechanical mouse (that type of coaster also isn't build since 1958!), is a bit large for an indoor coaster, lower the roof and don't use steel for it.

 

It doesn't look realistic....

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Hmm..i'm not likign this park too much. First of all, I think the wood/mining theme is wayy overused, and it's not unique at all. But if you can theme it good, it might look nice. But in your case... your themeing isn't that good pal, sorry to say. Try adding more detail to your architecture to avoid that blocky look. Try adding blaconies and windows. Use your imagination. And try different syles of roofing. Check out my Egyptian park here (Even though it's not finished, lol) and look at some of my buildings.

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