Entirety [NL]

[Koolkid]

Entirety is a fast-paced twisting wooden coaster. Bit of a weird name but my brain was working a bit slow at the time

 

 

heres the download

 

 

By the way this is my 3rd serious attempt at a roller coaster but I am still extremely please with it

Entireity.nltrack

[astroworldfan1]

Can you please post some pictures for those who don't have NL?

 

-Tatum

[Koolkid]

I'll try , may take a while for me to resize them though.

[dr.gumbo]

Not bad for a beginner, the layout was great for a twister.

 

What I liked

-The layout was actually quite good.

-Very good pacing throughout.

 

What could be improved

-Fails the tunnel test badly, this can easily fixed by placing a tunnel throughout the track and seeing if anything intrudes into the tunnel.

-A lot of under/over-banking, try and look at the forces to see if you've banked too much or less.

-The ride was very pumpy, but you'll get better at fixing this over time.

-The forces were far too strong at times, try and keep the forces as low as possible without sacrificing the thrills.

 

Just consider the points above for your next ride and I can assure you that your rides will improve.

[dmaxsba2408]

I liked the layout and the speed seemed fine, didn't care for the dip before the lift or the last 2 over banked turns before the mid-course brakes. A few of the turns after the brakes seemed a bit over banked also.

 

Good ride though.

[Koolkid]

Thanks very much for your feedback , will try and work on all of your points.