Thunderclap [NL]

[Jman]

Hey guys, Im new around here, but some of you may remember me from RCpro. Im 11 years old, and Ive been working with NL for two months now. This is my best work, so please comment, and Enjoy!

 

Please ride in light fog, thanks!

 

(I used Elemantary on inversions but other than that, the whole ride is made and smoothed by me.)

Compact Floorless.nltrack

Thunderclap download.

The Overveiw

The Helix in the sky

The whirlwind course after the MCBR

The wonderful Corbra Roll!

Edited November 11, 2010 by mcjaco

[phazan]

i thought this coaster was pretty cool. there was a little ''jerkyness'' in some areas, but mostly it was pretty good. also, the supports were kind of weird in some places, and it didnt look like there were enough supports.

 

overall, i gave it a 8/10

 

also, welcome to the site!

[Jman]

Yea, I cant stand the jerkeyness in the first drop, and the helix, is that where you thought it was jerky too?

[music11]

That cobra roll looks a little weird in one of the picks it looks like it has no supports maybe you should add some more. Anyways i like the rest of the coaster it looks pretty good but it looks like it needs some more supports in some areas.

[Jman]

Failed tunnel test-Huh?

 

All elements were prefab- and IMO if prefab elements are smoothed into the track (Which I did my best to do, without using ANY tools.) theres nothing wrong with using them. I did the supports quickly, so that makes sense.

[phazan]

^ there is nothing wrong with prefab elements, but when you submit your ocaster for other people to see, people dont want to see a coaster that took like 10 minutes to make, people want to see coasters that the creater has spent a lot of time making it. i use prefab elements sometimes when i am fooling around and just trying to make a cool coaster with no work invloved.

[Jman]

Hey, This coaster took me a good amount of time, ans I wasent slacking off or anything, its my best work.

[phazan]

i wasnt saying your coaster was like that, im saying sometimes when people use prefab elements, it means they arent spending a lot of time on their coaster.

i liked your coaster, thats why i gave it an 8.

[sfmmFREAK]

i LOVED how it whent over the station!

[FuNfReaK22]

GO 11 YEAR OLDS! WE SHALL RULE THE WORLD! ( Although i turn 12 in 4 weeks)

 

Awesome coaster! I wish i could download it but i dont have NL....