Help for a student !

[Theme-fest]

Hi forum members

 

I'm a regular viewer on the forum and was wondering if you mind sparing 2 minutes of your time to fill in a small questionnaire that i am conducting for my A-level coursework. Its mainly based on theme parks in the UK and technological advances within the industry. So if you have ever visited a UK theme park or are planning to could you please fill it in.

 

http://FreeOnlineSurveys.com/rendersurvey.asp?sid=g4nhulgbmlvevkt683597

 

Cheers

Arf

[larrygator]

Not to be critical but that survey needs to be taken down and corrected not only for grammatical but also spelling errors. I mean you didn't even spell "Merlin" correctly. Please have someone proofread it, a professional done survey will garner better results

 

Some suggestions.

The following sentence implies that Thorpe Park is a new park, makes it confusing. When a new ride has been built at a new theme park are you more likely to visit the park such as SAW the ride?

 

Question 13 says to only answer if you responded "Yes" to Question 12. However, if you don't respond the question 13, you can not submit the survey.

 

List the main theme parks you are referring to in Question 14.

 

Use spell check

 

Please use apostrophes

[Theme-fest]

Not to be critical but that survey needs to be taken down and corrected not only for grammatical but also spelling errors. I mean you didn't even spell "Merlin" correctly. Please have someone proofread it, a professional done survey will garner better results

 

Some suggestions.

The following sentence implies that Thorpe Park is a new park, makes it confusing. When a new ride has been built at a new theme park are you more likely to visit the park such as SAW the ride?

 

Question 13 says to only answer if you responded "Yes" to Question 12. However, if you don't respond the question 13, you can not submit the survey.

 

List the main theme parks you are referring to in Question 14.

 

Use spell check

 

Please use apostrophes

 

Thank you for pointing out the mistakes, very helpful. I've made amendments to the questions so hopefully it should be alright now.

[larrygator]

Much better, good luck with the results.

[davejon]

I like interesting questions about the amusement parks in the UK.I hope you get better result for your coursework.