[NL]Tomahawk

[Diab]

This is my first coaster that I actually made so that it wouldn't snap your neck.

 

I edited it a bit so the problems should be fixed.

[sfotkid]

Couple of things.

1. Lift needs to be straight

2. Watch the G's on the drop and the trun around

3. Brake run needs to be straight also!

 

Other then that, it was ok for a first!

Hint, Highlight the the middle of the lift, and the brake run and click I

[DeliriumTrigger]

Another thing you may want to have a look at is something called the "tunnel test." Basically, you enclose the entire track in a tunnel and make sure it doesn't hit any other part of the ride. For example, in this screenshot, all the people in the left seat will have lost their head by the time the train returns to the station.

 

But I agree with sfotkid, it's still a good first "real" coaster.

[Yankee cannonball]

while Liam, I'm here for my mandatory review

one word that will make your next coaster 10 times as good as this: HELIX.