coasterman37 Posted October 13, 2011 Posted October 13, 2011 (edited) Ok. So, this is my first park that I am putting on a forum. I am going to try my best to make this park something that people want to keep looking at. Since it is my first park, I would enjoy it if you guys can help me improve. Lets get to it! 1969 Hello. I am Johnathan Green. I am the future owner of Americana Theme Park. I hope to have a family park and a thrill park in one! We hope to have our park open by 1971. We have started our midway, but we haven't decided a name yet. I am asking you guys to come up with a name. It just might be the name of our midway! But lets get ti the pictures. Shot0235.bmp This is what we have so far. It will be more complete in my next update. Shot0236.bmp I think our buildings turned out nice. Shot0237.bmp That's all for now! Edited October 13, 2011 by mcjaco
funkeymon Posted October 13, 2011 Posted October 13, 2011 Its a nice start.. But what is the purpose of your buildings? They only seem to be decoration. They are also very similar. I like it, but I need to see more to give more advice.
coasterman37 Posted October 13, 2011 Author Posted October 13, 2011 Ok thanks funkymon. I just wanted them to make it to look like a midway. But there will be more to come.
MayTheGForceBeWithYou Posted October 13, 2011 Posted October 13, 2011 Not a bad start. I want to see where this project takes you! PS Try to clean up your picture using the David Walsh cheat (removes menu icons). It'll look more professional.
coasterman37 Posted October 17, 2011 Author Posted October 17, 2011 Sorry about not having an update lately. Soccer, hockey, and school have taken over lately. But I have an update now. Here you go! 1971 Hi again! I have another update for you. Lots of work has been done. Our midway is quickly going up. Here are some pictures of what we have so far. Shot0238.bmp This is the Burger Bar. We serve some fantastic burgers here. Shot0239.bmp This is a new building and our first ride! The Grand Carousel Shot0240.bmp This is where you can buy tickets to ride the rides. There will be more of these around the park. Shot0241.bmp Lastly, an overview.
funkeymon Posted October 17, 2011 Posted October 17, 2011 For a great burger, the building is lackluster. I suggest making it grander and try to mix up the scenery sets you are using. Anything you need help with though, I'd be happy to help.
coasterman37 Posted October 17, 2011 Author Posted October 17, 2011 Should I make the burger place bigger?
funkeymon Posted October 17, 2011 Posted October 17, 2011 Yes. Make it bigger, and taller. If you want people to eat there, then you have to attract them. Make it seem like a nice place to grab a meal.
coasterman37 Posted October 18, 2011 Author Posted October 18, 2011 Ok. Thank you for the help funkymon.
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