Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) UPDATE!!! (Translation: Oh, sorry about the year. I just reset the years by using the 8 Car trainer.) SCR450.bmp SCR441.bmp SCR444.bmp SCR454.bmp the top spin in the back ground was inspire by the crypt at kings dominion SCR452.bmp do you think the graud rails look good on congo rapids SCR453.bmp SCR483.bmp SOME NEW PICS SCR486.bmp Its is like G-Force at Drayton Manor but better and longer SCR479.bmp SCR496.bmp the whole entire ride of congo rapids SCR493.bmp This part of the carnivore is like intimadator 305 at kings dominion SCR480.bmp some kiddy slides SCR440.bmp if you guys dont notice the phantom flight is like de'ju'vu at six flags magic mountain but you have face to face cars on it SCR481.bmp this not finish yet but it like those race slides at king island and dollywood bu the slides are called Turbo H20 SCR5.bmp here it is the new ride its called scream fall SCR6.bmp sorry a meant to put this pic SCR477.bmp an over view Edited November 3, 2010 by Arrow Fan 13
djbrcace1234 Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 First, Welcome to TPR I like what I'm seeing, but so far I see you like the colors gray and brown in this park. Don't be shy to use more colors as well. Like the hacked Mega Faceoff type coaster. I mean you really have a great start here. Well done.
tiger01 Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 I quite like the Park! Interesting Invertigo and I love the Rapids!
Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 19, 2010 Author Posted September 19, 2010 thank you man for saying that becuse i thought people would hate it or something but im only 13 years old so i guess that good for my age
djbrcace1234 Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 Age should never discriminate how good someone can grasp on to the concpet of the game. I also don't know how realistic you're trying to go, but the supports on the coasters need some improvement. Use rcdb.com as a guide on support work.
Mastersax68 Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 Yes, listen to this man^. Welcome to TPR! I would say to use some more shrubs in your lineup of foliage, it will make everything seem more full. Other than that, and the supports, it looks good!
Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 19, 2010 Author Posted September 19, 2010 (edited) some new pics SCR5.bmp i made a new ride SCR8.bmp I also change the supports to on the mind twister and phantoms flight SCR9.bmp SCR10.bmp SCR3.bmp i also change some colors SCR4.bmp SCR29.bmp i made a new coaster SCR28.bmp it goes 60mph SCR27.bmp SCR22.bmp here the park entrance if you wanted to see it SCR25.bmp you got to have these Edited September 21, 2010 by Arrow Fan 13
Reviar Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 If it was a completely cleaned bench I believe no-one would mind. If it works for you and has what you need then thats brilliant. And gotta love that raftride, has a nice feeling too it.
CoasterCreator9 Posted September 19, 2010 Posted September 19, 2010 Awesome so far! LOVE the mega faceoff.
dmaxsba2408 Posted September 20, 2010 Posted September 20, 2010 If it was a completely cleaned bench I believe no-one would mind. If it works for you and has what you need then thats brilliant. And gotta love that raftride, has a nice feeling too it. I agree with ^. If a park has everything you want/need to build your own park there is nothing wrong with using it as the the base for a park you want to build. As for the Rapids Ride, I think it is the best ride in the park at the moment. Also wanted to send out a huge WELCOME to TPR and give you a heads up about posting here. I highly suggest you read the GAME FORUM ETIQUETTE topic before you post again. I would hate to see your topic shut right after you started it.
mcjaco Posted September 20, 2010 Posted September 20, 2010 (edited) I highly suggest you read the GAME FORUM ETIQUETTE topic before you post again. I would hate to see your topic shut right after you started it. Listen to dmax. He is very wise. Per the Posting Rules: 9. Spelling and Grammar - bad spelling and grammar will NOT be tolerated! Theme Park Review's forum includes a spell checker and there is a great one available with Google's Toolbar. If we have to edit too many of your posts, you may be suspended from the forum. Text Message shorthand or "l77t" speak is not allowed. A typo here and there is acceptable, but illegible posts are not. Edited September 20, 2010 by mcjaco
Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 20, 2010 Author Posted September 20, 2010 (edited) okay i didn't know i will go a head and read it okay sorry but do you like my park thought SCR37.bmp I made a new cafe called Thrill Grill. SCR34.bmp It just three food stalls. SCR38.bmp I also made a basketball court and an Arcade. SCR36.bmp The inside of the Arcade. Edited September 23, 2010 by Arrow Fan 13
dmaxsba2408 Posted September 23, 2010 Posted September 23, 2010 Love the red building, it looks like a face. You putting thought as to what is going inside your buildings and arranging it like it would be in real life is a great touch. Also the basket ball area is perfect! Yes, I got your PM, why did you not add these pictures in a new post and get it bumped back up so everyone knows you updated? Not that it matters my post will do it now ...and yes I am so happy you have fixed your grammar issues in the captions under each picture. It makes it so much nicer to read and it will keep you out of trouble around here.
imawesome1124 Posted September 23, 2010 Posted September 23, 2010 This is really nice so far. My only suggestion is to put flower boxes and shutters on the windows in the red building.
Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 23, 2010 Author Posted September 23, 2010 Okay but I have some new pictures. SCR40.bmp The new ride is called Blue Diamond Splash Down. SCR41.bmp SCR43.bmp
Calicoasters Posted September 23, 2010 Posted September 23, 2010 Looks great, my only suggestion would be to use the smaller drop first, then a larger drop on Blue Diamond.
Mastersax68 Posted September 24, 2010 Posted September 24, 2010 ^I agree. I would also say to add some Art/Deco pieces to your walls, to make them less bland. Another thing, don't be afraid to mix up your extures a little bit. The smooth surface everywhere is becoming an eyesore.
Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 25, 2010 Author Posted September 25, 2010 Okay, but here some new pictures. SCR56.bmp I made a new ride called The Cortex. SCR59.bmp SCR63.bmp I also change the drop on Blue Diamond Splash Down. SCR61.bmp I also put some items on the station. SCR62.bmp SCR55.bmp I aslo made a new shop called Thrill Shop. SCR57.bmp SCR58.bmp The inside.
djbrcace1234 Posted September 25, 2010 Posted September 25, 2010 Blue diamond looks alot better with just more stack scenerey like you did there. Some advice though... Don't waist shop stalls because if this is a big park, they eat away the amount of rides you may use. But other than that, I'm liking this park.
braztaz Posted September 25, 2010 Posted September 25, 2010 Blue diamond looks alot better with just more stack scenerey like you did there. Some advice though... Don't waist shop stalls because if this is a big park, they eat away the amount of rides you may use. But other than that, I'm liking this park. Wise words. The park is coming along nicely, though!
Arrow Fan 13 Posted September 26, 2010 Author Posted September 26, 2010 Big Update!!! SCR66.bmp First is that I made a new cafe called Orange Bowl Cafe. SCR67.bmp SCR77.bmp Then I finally made a main street. SCR79.bmp SCR75.bmp SCR80.bmp SCR78.bmp Last is an overview of the almost finish park. SCR81.bmp New coaster and it is called The Jet Scream. SCR82.bmp It goes through the station. SCR90.bmp SCR84.bmp SCR87.bmp An overview of the coaster.
Cavs Fan Posted September 27, 2010 Posted September 27, 2010 I am loving the park. Great work. I just think that the name for the new coaster should be changed to something more fitting. It is your park though, so you should do whatever think's best.
AJClarke0912 Posted September 28, 2010 Posted September 28, 2010 The woodie needs some wide supports. Other than that, awesome! It would totally beat out SFKK!
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